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Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Driving Home in May

in summer
i drive
exposed through car doors
music loud enough
to make the mirrors tremble
drum beats so thick
that i could wrap my shoulders
in a cloak of vibration
a coat of heartbeats
windows wide and wondering
if my road mates feel rhythm in their blood
if they tap their steering wheels
or simply nod
in the uncontainable expression
of the steady or the syncopated
I scan adjacent lanes for open windows
hoping they will hear
that they might feel the bass climbing up
past rubber soles and coiled shocks
and perhaps
amidst the rippling heat
of summer and exhaust
your pulse will find mine
and we will connect.

4 comments:

grburbank said...

Another fantastic poem! Summer is absolutely the time for road trips and blasting the music. I enjoy the images of a "cloak of vibration / a coat of heartbeats" and "the rippling heat / of summer and exhuast." I enjoy the ending as well.

Kevin and Katie Hulett said...

nice... =)

Claire Bagley Hayes said...

I drive with my windows open every warm day of the year. I always hope that people will enjoy hearing my music as much as I enjoy hearing my music.

Tulsi said...

I can't post on the other one for some reason, but Steve and I sat behind you in RS/Priesthood Sunday. She is so teeny. Cute name, too!!